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这样的小诗像夏日里一阵凉凉的风

那一抹金色的夕阳，that is a golden falling sun
斜斜的照在身上， Irradiation in my body
如玉的轮廓， just like the Contour of the Jade
闪烁出圣洁的光芒。flashing the holy sight of our mind
那是维纳斯的化身，maybe that is Venus's Incarnation
那是你的脸庞， maybe that is your face
我想永远留住这一刻， I just want to hold that moment
我想把你写进我的心上。 puting you into my heart
可是， but...
我只能眼睁睁的看着， i could only stare at you quietly
时间从我的指缝中流失， feeling your disappeared from the time we spend together
我是那么的无奈， so disappointed I am
我是如此的苍白。 so pale I am
我要怎样， how can I do this
才能穿越时间的阻碍， to cross the Obstruction of the time
把你的美丽收藏。 to keep the beauty of your heart
于是， so ,
我只能用手中的它， I could only keep it with my hand
我视为生命的它。 and I act it as my life
它闪着冷冷的光， with flashing lights on it
它的眼睛敏锐非常， and with the sharp eyes
它会把你最美好的时刻留下来， it will store the happy memories
把你一生最值得回忆的片断， it will put all the memories
放进那水晶的相框。 into crystal frames
一切都静静的， all things become quite
怀念， missed
珍藏 collected
.... ..

丽江雨季 在上文中提到：
那一抹金色的夕阳，that is a golden falling sun
斜斜的照在身上， Irradiation in my body
如玉的轮廓， just like the Contour of the Jade
闪烁出圣洁的光芒。flashing the holy sight of our mind
那是维纳斯的化身，maybe that is Venus's Incarnation
那是你的脸庞， maybe that is your face
我想永远留住这一刻， I just want to hold that moment
我想把你写进我的心上。 puting you into my heart
可是， but...
我只能眼睁睁的看着， i could only stare at you quietly
时间从我的指缝中流失， feeling your disappeared from the time we spend together
我是那么的无奈， so disappointed I am
我是如此的苍白。 so pale I am
我要怎样， how can I do this
才能穿越时间的阻碍， to cross the Obstruction of the time
把你的美丽收藏。 to keep the beauty of your heart
于是， so ,
我只能用手中的它， I could only keep it with my hand
我视为生命的它。 and I act it as my life
它闪着冷冷的光， with flashing lights on it
它的眼睛敏锐非常， and with the sharp eyes
它会把你最美好的时刻留下来， it will store the happy memories
把你一生最值得回忆的片断， it will put all the memories
放进那水晶的相框。 into crystal frames
一切都静静的， all things become quite
怀念， missed
珍藏 collected
.... ..

  这是翻译的,不是原创的?

我翻译的她的 她的也是原创的 呵呵

丽江雨季 在上文中提到：
那一抹金色的夕阳，that is a golden falling sun
斜斜的照在身上， Irradiation in my body
如玉的轮廓， just like the Contour of the Jade
闪烁出圣洁的光芒。flashing the holy sight of our mind
那是维纳斯的化身，maybe that is Venus's Incarnation
那是你的脸庞， maybe that is your face
我想永远留住这一刻， I just want to hold that moment
我想把你写进我的心上。 puting you into my heart
可是， but...
我只能眼睁睁的看着， i could only stare at you quietly
时间从我的指缝中流失， feeling your disappeared from the time we spend together
我是那么的无奈， so disappointed I am
我是如此的苍白。 so pale I am
我要怎样， how can I do this
才能穿越时间的阻碍， to cross the Obstruction of the time
把你的美丽收藏。 to keep the beauty of your heart
于是， so ,
我只能用手中的它， I could only keep it with my hand
我视为生命的它。 and I act it as my life
它闪着冷冷的光， with flashing lights on it
它的眼睛敏锐非常， and with the sharp eyes
它会把你最美好的时刻留下来， it will store the happy memories
把你一生最值得回忆的片断， it will put all the memories
放进那水晶的相框。 into crystal frames
一切都静静的， all things become quite
怀念， missed
珍藏 collected
.... ..

谢谢你把我的诗翻译成了英语，呵呵。

丽江雨季 在上文中提到：
我翻译的她的 她的也是原创的 呵呵

厉害  

丽江雨季 在上文中提到：
我翻译的她的 她的也是原创的 呵呵

    

好诗

厉害，